Today online . our class room 2 had to write a short story about being kind. and there had to be a message .in that story . when we had finished . our work we had to put our story on our blog .
Thanks for sharing your story. It was kind to ask the girl to sit next to you at lunch and to play with you. I'm curious about why the person was sad and what you did to cheer them up? Think about using full stops to separate your sentences and use a capital letter to show the beginning of a new sentence.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
HI Klaudia,
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing your story. It was kind to ask the girl to sit next to you at lunch and to play with you. I'm curious about why the person was sad and what you did to cheer them up? Think about using full stops to separate your sentences and use a capital letter to show the beginning of a new sentence.
thank you
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